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Just some thought about love...
Psychedelic illusion of life,
Love takes us and leads us to strife,
It lures us,
Deludes us,
And appears to shine before our eyes
But we never seem to realize.
For us whole it will devour,
And when we find out, it will be too late,
Because then we will meet our fate
And realize that has come our last hour.
Love takes us and leads us to strife,
It lures us,
Deludes us,
And appears to shine before our eyes
But we never seem to realize.
For us whole it will devour,
And when we find out, it will be too late,
Because then we will meet our fate
And realize that has come our last hour.
Published 19th May 2014
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Anonymous
19th May 2014 9:58pm
Surely a good write, the lines invite the reader in!
Thanks :) Being kind of friendly and intriguing, somewhat appealing was precisely the aim of this writing to be honest, glad it worked out well !
19th May 2014 11:06pm
20th May 2014 7:05am
That might be true indeed... But here I'm talking with my own experiences as inspiration and this is kinda how Love appears to me right now. Perhaps that's because this Love I've felt came from a very strong desire... Even envy, to be honest. That might be why my vision of love is different.
Thanks for the feedback, though :)
Thanks for the feedback, though :)
21st May 2014 2:06pm
21st May 2014 3:39pm
