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i made you promise too many times
the light on the ceiling is yellow
and if i have found answers, they have
come to me in the form of a drunken angel--
the question is again
will the drink make me somber
or help me forget
i wonder if we are playing the same game
or if you have already forgotten me
i told you it would hurt but not break me
if my heart were not already broken
it would be true
i promise
Published 15th May 2014
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Anonymous
15th May 2014 9:55am
Very genuine write, I thought the simplicity of the structure made this poem have a strong impact. Well written!
Anonymous
13th Aug 2014 4:22pm
"The question is again
Will the drink make me somber
Or help me forget
I wonder if we are playing the same game"
-excellent lines
Will the drink make me somber
Or help me forget
I wonder if we are playing the same game"
-excellent lines
