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Beats the Love
Smoking hot
I and I
u
upon the blue
over horizon
sea
bed
see
floors
floating devil eyes
away with weighing
sweating flesh
searching fingers
fucking
probing
wet scales
balancing lost
now found
love
sound
playing breathless
silence golden
beats the love
tuneful
Published 12th May 2014
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12th May 2014 4:01pm
12th May 2014 4:11pm
12th May 2014 4:21pm
....jeez louise, had to look at the category twice, couldn't figure out why this was spiritual because it was kinda' sorta' somewhat' just-a-little, wee bit, maybe a smug of-HOTNESS! :) but..... the beauty of it is, love is infact spiritual and it ties in together. Nice Rose! Xo
12th May 2014 4:26pm
aww thankyou Rain*
yeah i did debate about what category myself
but love (as you said) is very spiritual to me so spiritual it was :) thankyou
yeah i did debate about what category myself
but love (as you said) is very spiritual to me so spiritual it was :) thankyou
It reminds me of dreams of mermaids...I know I'm way off base but still it does.
12th May 2014 8:12pm
It's about when in the love zone that moment shared
that nothing matters
it's as if you could be under the sea and away
so yeah in a way your right xD
that nothing matters
it's as if you could be under the sea and away
so yeah in a way your right xD
12th May 2014 10:16pm
13th May 2014 5:07am
