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Listen
Can you hear it?
The bell-like sound
sweet and lovely
like a fairys melody
Can you hear the
crystal clear tune
that playful humming
the undertone
Isnt it stunning
what a shattered heart
sounds like?
The bell-like sound
sweet and lovely
like a fairys melody
Can you hear the
crystal clear tune
that playful humming
the undertone
Isnt it stunning
what a shattered heart
sounds like?
Published 11th May 2014
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11th May 2014 10:46pm
11th May 2014 10:53pm
Without us? That I doubt ... since we hurt and bleed. Hopefully you don't hear the tune, Hawk. Thanks for your insightful comment!
11th May 2014 11:03pm
or like tiny shards
of broken glass,
in pieces, but
still sharp...
you paint sad and yet
attractive images, a
lovely poem...
of broken glass,
in pieces, but
still sharp...
you paint sad and yet
attractive images, a
lovely poem...
12th May 2014 1:27am
That's exactly I was thinking of ... tiny shards of shattered glas. Sharp, hurting, making you bleed. You got it perfectly! Thanks, Paul.
11th May 2014 11:06pm
12th May 2014 1:24am
12th May 2014 1:08am
Boy you had me feeling so comfortable and warm...then you dropped me (nice work Miss Chi)
12th May 2014 1:13am
No, never comfortable, never warm but always, always on a tightrope. Together but alone. Never more than that. Thanks, Hash ... xx
12th May 2014 1:35am
Thank you, Bludy_Obsess, I only tried to express my feelings and am happy that you like this little excerpt of my inner mess :-). Glad to see you here!
12th May 2014 1:59am
12th May 2014 8:28am
Yes, dear John, but already brushing off my wings :-). Crystal clear that life goes on. Thanks ...
12th May 2014 3:36am
Oh no! I can't believe anyone would brake that sexy and passionate heart : (
You are so beautiful that even your heartbreak sounds beautiful. Touching.
You are so beautiful that even your heartbreak sounds beautiful. Touching.
12th May 2014 8:30am
*blush* I'm so humbled by your lovely words, Lena-underneath! No one is immune to love sickness and heart breaks, sadly. Thank you kindly for your upbeat comment!
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12th May 2014 9:09pm
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13th May 2014 7:04am
13th May 2014 7:26am
Thanks for stopping by and leaving this beautiful comment, Brinda! Much appreaciated!
Anonymous
13th May 2014 12:34pm
Yes, indeed, before its totally silent, one can hear a faint humming...
13th May 2014 12:44pm
