breathless

Ms. Tommie Lynn, this is hot!
Figuratively and literally, hot!  :)
Especially, since the average bolt of lightning is 53,000°F
which is five times hotter than the Sun. Whew!  :)

Love your comment VegasPoet . Thank you for reading me :)

I really like this Tommie!  Nice write!

Thank you ISOK :)

I know the feeling:) hot write!

It's a wonderful feeling KittyFromHell. Thank you :)

bottle it and sell it
make billions
nice Tommie

Now that would be something wouldn't it Poet? Always enjoy your feedback, thank you :)

tis a great desire
of human beings

gals and guys
want to die burning

as in the heat of sex
a bolt from the blue
would do

when we both burn entwined  
what more can any one ask

O GoD of SEX

from you

Orgasmic flames
of guys and dames

Thank you A. :)

YES! That's all I can say :)

Appreciate you reading GW.  :)

Flesh flashing fire! .. bolting jolt of desire!
Very nice Tommie.. spark me with electricity anytime!

Your comment makes me smile jackhammer. Glad you enjoyed it. Thank you ;)

You never let me down Tommie. So few words but describes everything

I appreciate your words Dirtfarm. Thank you very much.  :)

so beautiful this write.. lovely Tommie :) with love Crim

Thanks for the love Crim. :)

This poem brings back memories of the first love of my life. So passionate and all consuming. Enjoyed it.

I'm happy this took you back down memory lane. Those first times are always some of the best. Thank you ;)