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I don't Like you
You're a dick head asshole
I wanted to be nicer about it
But I can't
So accept my scorn
Knowing I was honest with you
I feel a little bad though
I do consider myself a gentleman
So, I'm taking back the dick head part
You're just an asshole
I hope you can appreciate my sensitivity
I wanted to be nicer about it
But I can't
So accept my scorn
Knowing I was honest with you
I feel a little bad though
I do consider myself a gentleman
So, I'm taking back the dick head part
You're just an asshole
I hope you can appreciate my sensitivity
Published 6th May 2014
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6th May 2014 4:56pm
Is it wrong to like a poem about not liking someone else? LTM Good write!
6th May 2014 5:26pm
No, its totally right to like this write, Ltm
Thx Knew, love the LTM reference
Thx Knew, love the LTM reference
I so can relate to that. Do you mean someone I used to know :-)? Not nicely said but all the more nicely put, and refreshing!
6th May 2014 5:27pm
For some off reason..this made me smile :) ... not in the fact that some douche was an ass with you.. but in that your words expressed sarcasm and wit while delivering a cutting blow... nicely done. with love and respect..xoxo domore
6th May 2014 5:29pm
Thx Samantha
Sometimes you just have to say what's on your mind, no sugar coating.
xx
Sometimes you just have to say what's on your mind, no sugar coating.
xx
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Anonymous
6th May 2014 7:12pm
HA! Right on!
No need to mince words
Say it like it is
No need to mince words
Say it like it is
6th May 2014 7:18pm
Anonymous
6th May 2014 9:41pm
Wow, I need to stop reading poetry and create some fucking chaos! Love to your "straight up verbal assaults!". . .xo, Devlin.
6th May 2014 10:02pm
I want a front row seat when you start the bar brawl
Might even sell advance tickets
xx
Might even sell advance tickets
xx
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7th May 2014 4:42am
You're a little saucy at the moment! I really like the brutal sugarless wording, perfect!! xx
7th May 2014 11:34am
7th May 2014 11:57am
Ah, civility at it's finest lol ... Gentleman that you are.
How is it we're programmed to be so civil with the one's we have the greatest disdain for (usually at work) ... Yet rip the one's we love to shreds?
I love the humor to this
How is it we're programmed to be so civil with the one's we have the greatest disdain for (usually at work) ... Yet rip the one's we love to shreds?
I love the humor to this
7th May 2014 12:26pm
You make great valid points.
And that's what this piece is about. Withholding and then lashing out.
Thanks for your comments, you have always gotten my take on the world.
Appreciate you.
And that's what this piece is about. Withholding and then lashing out.
Thanks for your comments, you have always gotten my take on the world.
Appreciate you.
7th May 2014 4:56pm
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