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A Shot
I took a double shot of her,
downed her in one gulp at the bar,
smooth tasting …
then I placed the shot glass gently down and walked away…
by Philip Wardlow 2014
downed her in one gulp at the bar,
smooth tasting …
then I placed the shot glass gently down and walked away…
by Philip Wardlow 2014
Published 30th Apr 2014
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1st May 2014 00:07am
1st May 2014 3:06am
Yes...whoever this guy is ...he is definitely a smooth operator..:)....Thanks for the comment Crim
1st May 2014 1:39am
And why does that not surprise me about you :) Thanks for the comment Nikki, looking fwd to seeing you around.
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- Edited 1st May 2014 7:24pm
1st May 2014 7:04pm
Sighing.
It's poems like these that inspire me to become a better poet. This is beyond beautiful, Philip. . .xo, Devlin.
It's poems like these that inspire me to become a better poet. This is beyond beautiful, Philip. . .xo, Devlin.
2nd May 2014 2:12am
High praise from you my Devlin...you have many written many a unique astounding turns of phrase I couldn't pull off..:)
7th Jun 2014 1:13pm
unique satisfaction
after a single shot
many never stop short of three
at least two
how did u ?
after a single shot
many never stop short of three
at least two
how did u ?
