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Rising
I was frozen placated content.
You shattered peace but don't repent.
I offered my flesh your ego needed more.
You would not rest please confess.
Till you tore it from my shattered chest.
Not a treasure but a trinket a token.
for the pyre of your wounded pride.
Don't try and hide or yet deny.
There is no kindness in a lie.
You furnace burned me to my core.
I should thank you, before
I never needed more.
You woke the ashen bird inside
For years it used to hide.
That winged myth of fire.
Which now rises to inspire.
- a oldish rewrite
You shattered peace but don't repent.
I offered my flesh your ego needed more.
You would not rest please confess.
Till you tore it from my shattered chest.
Not a treasure but a trinket a token.
for the pyre of your wounded pride.
Don't try and hide or yet deny.
There is no kindness in a lie.
You furnace burned me to my core.
I should thank you, before
I never needed more.
You woke the ashen bird inside
For years it used to hide.
That winged myth of fire.
Which now rises to inspire.
- a oldish rewrite
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