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Beyond the cold climates weathered storm front warnings
opening old gates, poppy fields over hills, it's beautiful,
whispers the wind, cries through flowing locks in shallow rivers
crystal complexions cooling the temperament on melting ice
maidens dripping on daisy crown coronations in daylights fanfare
shimmer, warming the core like the sun just imploded within my heart.
opening old gates, poppy fields over hills, it's beautiful,
whispers the wind, cries through flowing locks in shallow rivers
crystal complexions cooling the temperament on melting ice
maidens dripping on daisy crown coronations in daylights fanfare
shimmer, warming the core like the sun just imploded within my heart.
Published 25th Apr 2014
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25th Apr 2014 3:07pm
This is so amazing because I can close my eyes and picture this I love it rose
Ava
Ava
25th Apr 2014 3:10pm
25th Apr 2014 3:43pm
25th Apr 2014 3:59pm
25th Apr 2014 5:49pm
Check it again miss. Don't see things like this in my desert. Go ahead, check it again!
25th Apr 2014 6:01pm
25th Apr 2014 5:51pm
okay, is this about you? Because while the picture is beautiful, I can't help but feel like it's about you and your love.
Either way, it's beautiful!
Either way, it's beautiful!
25th Apr 2014 6:06pm
nope not about me as such and definatly not about the one i'm with right now
but your comments are most welcome Lena
but your comments are most welcome Lena
25th Apr 2014 8:51pm
25th Apr 2014 9:06pm
Anonymous
26th Apr 2014 1:01am
So wondrously penned ... you have grown in your work so much... this is beautiful, mature poetry...
26th Apr 2014 5:22am
