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Simplicity
In sync we move
To the beat
Of our hearts
Lips joining
In quiet expressions
The simplicity
Of but a mere kiss
Opens us up
To greater things
Than this
To the beat
Of our hearts
Lips joining
In quiet expressions
The simplicity
Of but a mere kiss
Opens us up
To greater things
Than this
Published 24th Apr 2014
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24th Apr 2014 10:23pm
Kitty like a passionate wind has blown through stirring my blood is this beautiful kiss.. with love Crim :)
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9th Aug 2014 7:24pm
Fewer words have deeper meanings I find, which I why I admire short poems like this.
Your work is lush and vibrant.
Your work is lush and vibrant.
9th Aug 2014 7:31pm
I agree.. Unless the writer is very skilled and able to hold my attention throughout a long piece. I have the attention span of a donut.
I'm happy you enjoyed:)
I'm happy you enjoyed:)
