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Marionette
Kidnapped and raped
now just a marionette
for your sick fetish
poseable limbs
put in obscene
positions your toy
you cover my face
a macabre spectacle
whose face you
don't wish to see
as I scream
contorted with anguish
hate for who you are
pulling all the strings
I am your masterpiece
in your art gallery
of horror and pain
amongst all of your
ghoulish experiments
the female form twisted
bent to suit your
sick, depraved needs
uncover my face
you coward so I can spit
my venom stinging your gaping maw
the one that strangles the life
from my fellow prisoners
fucking them in violence
then covering your shame
masked man I've never seen
i'll see you in hell
you've brought out the devil in me
playing with me
like a brand new dolly
fuck you!!!
I'm shackeled for now
but give me a moments reprieve
I will slit your throat
(entered in Rain's interpretive art comp.)
now just a marionette
for your sick fetish
poseable limbs
put in obscene
positions your toy
you cover my face
a macabre spectacle
whose face you
don't wish to see
as I scream
contorted with anguish
hate for who you are
pulling all the strings
I am your masterpiece
in your art gallery
of horror and pain
amongst all of your
ghoulish experiments
the female form twisted
bent to suit your
sick, depraved needs
uncover my face
you coward so I can spit
my venom stinging your gaping maw
the one that strangles the life
from my fellow prisoners
fucking them in violence
then covering your shame
masked man I've never seen
i'll see you in hell
you've brought out the devil in me
playing with me
like a brand new dolly
fuck you!!!
I'm shackeled for now
but give me a moments reprieve
I will slit your throat
(entered in Rain's interpretive art comp.)
Published 15th Apr 2014
| Edited 17th Apr 2014
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15th Apr 2014 1:15am
Oh my, this gave me shivers...
I'm shackeled for now
but give me a moments reprieve
I will slit your throat
perfectly expressed, with such vivid imagery... great ink xx
I'm shackeled for now
but give me a moments reprieve
I will slit your throat
perfectly expressed, with such vivid imagery... great ink xx
15th Apr 2014 7:34am
Damn! Hell of a write, Lovely Lady!
Regarding this piece being entered, it's no competition. This is the winner. :)
Regarding this piece being entered, it's no competition. This is the winner. :)
15th Apr 2014 7:36am
thank you Chad for the most gracious comment and vote of confidence :) with love Crim
15th Apr 2014 1:53am
15th Apr 2014 7:36am
15th Apr 2014 2:38am
this is a powerful accompaniment to Rain's forbidding artwork. provocatively intense, Crim...
15th Apr 2014 7:37am
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15th Apr 2014 7:50am
15th Apr 2014 8:44am
i saw the comp last night and knew if you entered, no one else would stand a chance.... i think i was right.
erotic, terrifying and fucking brilliant.
best of luck beautiful Brenda xo
erotic, terrifying and fucking brilliant.
best of luck beautiful Brenda xo
15th Apr 2014 3:39pm
thank you beautiful Katja for the vote of confidence though your write is so much better than mine lovely one :) with love Brenda
15th Apr 2014 3:57pm
Holy flappers! I just shit my pants!! lmao jk...
But hey I neatly could've! lol... Intensely dark
n brooding raw vent-fest
But hey I neatly could've! lol... Intensely dark
n brooding raw vent-fest
15th Apr 2014 4:19pm
thank you Poe for making me laugh this morning and your for your support :) with love Crim
15th Apr 2014 4:32pm
15th Apr 2014 4:39pm
thank you beautiful Angel for the vote of confidence though the competition is fierce :) with love Crim
15th Apr 2014 7:13pm
Holy shit Brenda, this
is a double-barrel shotgun
aimed right between the
eyes of some poor mother-fucker.
May the Gods rest his soul.
Intense piece of art here... Pan
is a double-barrel shotgun
aimed right between the
eyes of some poor mother-fucker.
May the Gods rest his soul.
Intense piece of art here... Pan
15th Apr 2014 7:42pm
15th Apr 2014 8:05pm
Love your intensity, gripping and raw. I see savage teeth dripping with blood, the blood of tainted tears blacked from rage. Awesome write
15th Apr 2014 8:15pm
thank you Soul yeah I was in a mood yesterday and it came out in my writing :) with love Crim
15th Apr 2014 8:46pm
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16th Apr 2014 12:18pm
An intense dark piece Crim. Just waiting for the chance to hit back... Great stuff dear lady.
All the best in the comp :)
All the best in the comp :)
16th Apr 2014 10:48pm
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- Edited 18th Apr 2014 8:24am
18th Apr 2014 8:22am
Um.....this is stunning and a moving write. Intense for sure. Xo :)
18th Apr 2014 2:46pm
21st Apr 2014 7:11pm
Your sweet ink keeps me on edge always Ms. Brenda!!!
Great write and read as usual!!!
Sir Lancelott
Great write and read as usual!!!
Sir Lancelott
21st Apr 2014 7:39pm
29th Apr 2014 7:05pm
This was such a powerful and beautiful piece Crim. It was as if you put on the mask and penned her internal war. So amazing, this ink. Thanks for the entry....Xo
30th Apr 2014 00:49am
thank you lovely Rain for such a gracious comment and a very inspiring comp. :) with love Crim
