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"I Love You!"
"I love you," I told her,
while she turned her back and gave me the cold shoulder
"I love you," I said again.
But, she said," I think we should just be friends.
But,"I love you." I said now with my hands around her throat.
But, she said nothing, which wasn't the response that in which i hoped.
"I still love you!" I yelled, to the still body on the floor.
So I take my gun, and now we will be together forever and more.
while she turned her back and gave me the cold shoulder
"I love you," I said again.
But, she said," I think we should just be friends.
But,"I love you." I said now with my hands around her throat.
But, she said nothing, which wasn't the response that in which i hoped.
"I still love you!" I yelled, to the still body on the floor.
So I take my gun, and now we will be together forever and more.
Published 14th Apr 2014
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14th Apr 2014 11:42pm
15th Apr 2014 1:30am
dude really? -.- you would've so totally of said something different if it were a girl trying to put a guy in his "Place". there was no need to say that. anyways that's my opinion such is yours.
15th Apr 2014 4:58am
Well, maybe he should have shot himself first. Then she could have found a friend she liked better.
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