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Heaven By Design.....
"something that you told me stays in my head...a moving exchange of vows, here and now..I think of you, and your delicate creations in full view, (sigh) love remember me"[/font]
a beautiful garden of Eden,
peach blush, rouge pinks, yellows....pale pastels
a gentleness surrounds the bridal path
a softness that belies all that I find in you.......
….remember me
standing in his precense
before the throne of grace
a radiance from her perfect face
emotions flow from his soul that
he can't control...."doctor my eyes"
thinking, “I just want to be loved....”
….remember me
exchanging sacred vows
“here and now
I vow to be one with thee
You're all I need “
Saying “I do”
and before it's through
lips meet in a kiss
that make the cherubs blush
the celebration of you and I
becoming us......
….remember me
sail on silver bird
across our ribbon in the sky
connecting us to a sublime
Island paradise
Waters so clear and blue
colors brilliant,
sands so clear and so pure....
“...our love will stand tall as the trees
our love will spread wide as the sea
our love will shine bright in the night
like the stars above, and we'll always be together “
.....remember me
my eyes stare upon
the most beautiful woman
in this man's world
laying there
naked
upon virgin bed,
my gift eternal
more beautiful than a single, red rose
you give yourself to me, my queen
and in this moment, we become one
I shall forever be your king...
I take your body
and you take mine
in a bountiful feast
this blessed union of kindred souls
so intimately
we are made whole
from tropical sunset
to a brilliant new sunrise
there is no greater love than this
a love for all time
blissful, effortless
this feels so right, my baby love
you are my always and forever
for the rest of my life.....
….remember me
Published 13th Apr 2014
| Edited 14th Apr 2014
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13th Apr 2014 10:06pm
Is there violins playing in the background to a sweet symphony haha?
Love the title & incorporation of nature & color.
I want to insinuate this is a marriage but i don't mean to imply, the slight tint of sexuality is nice too.
Love this Love poem!
Love the title & incorporation of nature & color.
I want to insinuate this is a marriage but i don't mean to imply, the slight tint of sexuality is nice too.
Love this Love poem!
13th Apr 2014 11:24pm
....more a marriage of ideas and the desire to meld into this very liquid dream. Innuendo....hoping that she can feel the same : )
and btw, a symphony? More like a jazz symphony, Ellington perhaps. "Mood Indigo" : )
and btw, a symphony? More like a jazz symphony, Ellington perhaps. "Mood Indigo" : )
14th Apr 2014 9:40pm
Niiccee thank you for the clarification. I'm sure she could!
Ahhh yes, Jazz of course is better..love Mood Indigo in my playlist.=D
Ahhh yes, Jazz of course is better..love Mood Indigo in my playlist.=D
14th Apr 2014 2:21am
Reading this poem has made my day and is the most beautiful poem I have read today..... I can always count on you to "inspire" me with your poetry emotionally, erotically, and everywhere else in between... Thank you for being you and for being the outstanding poet that you are..... ;) ♡♡♡
14th Apr 2014 2:56am
14th Apr 2014 5:54am
This is just gorgeous by 'heaven's design'...
Natalie Cole's presence sealed the deal. Xoxo
You should let me plan your wedding, I'll give you a discount.<- *insider* ;)
http://youtu.be/CxkkYIK_sS8
Natalie Cole's presence sealed the deal. Xoxo
You should let me plan your wedding, I'll give you a discount.<- *insider* ;)
http://youtu.be/CxkkYIK_sS8
14th Apr 2014 6:09am
....you know that you are the "only one" I would ever consider for the task. I would rest assured that you would handle my nuptials with the same finesse that would be applied to your own wedding : ) Thank you for the comment and the offer
#ourlove
#ourlove
14th Apr 2014 7:41am
Truly Beautiful Mr M .. really like the tender tone
"A gentleness surrounds the bridal path
a softness that belies all that I find in you" ahhh sweet ink..enjoyed!!
"A gentleness surrounds the bridal path
a softness that belies all that I find in you" ahhh sweet ink..enjoyed!!
14th Apr 2014 12:34pm
