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Kissing Flames At Midnight
Pill bottle in one hand and his soul in the other
he walked willingly into the midnight
his tears were frozen somewhere in time,
just not this time.
he who regrets nothing will not look back
he has forgotten, he carries only the burden of life
his life, not hers yet she floats somewhere,
just not in this moment
as the fires burn, he walks and he begins to remember
he grips his pill bottle tighter,
accidently, he dropped his soul, he never even noticed,
she did but it was to late, the fires had already taken it away.
he walked willingly into the midnight
his tears were frozen somewhere in time,
just not this time.
he who regrets nothing will not look back
he has forgotten, he carries only the burden of life
his life, not hers yet she floats somewhere,
just not in this moment
as the fires burn, he walks and he begins to remember
he grips his pill bottle tighter,
accidently, he dropped his soul, he never even noticed,
she did but it was to late, the fires had already taken it away.
Published 9th Apr 2014
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- Edited 9th Apr 2014 9:18pm
9th Apr 2014 9:17pm
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9th Apr 2014 11:34pm
9th Apr 2014 9:47pm
Great first line, plus the follow-up where he drops his soul, super concept... You could write more on this!
9th Apr 2014 11:35pm
yes this could be elaborated on from either the beginning or the end,
Thank you Atakti for reading my crap :)
10th Apr 2014 4:46am
I really like this one nikki. You're sarcasm is the best on here but this one was great.
10th Apr 2014 9:47pm
Nikki Your ability to express all facets of Your imagination and emotion keep You as a truly giving Writer...what style of delivery You will choose is always a happy surprise-Rock on Hellion!!!
11th Apr 2014 3:21am
12th Apr 2014 10:59pm
With what pathos was this written! The dropping of souls is all too common and very often goes Unnoticed.
Excellent write Nikki
Excellent write Nikki
13th Apr 2014 3:00pm
