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just a thought
Is life a perception?
Or a stopping point?
We are made to believe in an afterlife
So really we are just continued beyond this existence
For the rest of time
So is mortality like the time of birth and infancy?
Because the young of a species learns what is presented
And we are learning every day of what is to come
And how to live our lives, when afterlife is yet to come
So in our journey of existence,
We are the children of our creator
This is our time of birth
Our time to learn and find out who we are
So really we are all just babies
Or a stopping point?
We are made to believe in an afterlife
So really we are just continued beyond this existence
For the rest of time
So is mortality like the time of birth and infancy?
Because the young of a species learns what is presented
And we are learning every day of what is to come
And how to live our lives, when afterlife is yet to come
So in our journey of existence,
We are the children of our creator
This is our time of birth
Our time to learn and find out who we are
So really we are all just babies
Published 29th Mar 2014
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23rd Sep 2014 10:46pm
Guess we're all supposed to find out eventually--
If we'll end up in a box in the ground--
Or if death is only the beginning.
Just don't be one to try to find out that answer too early~
Although the truth to this thought seemed like it should be optimistic (to some, if they expect death to be an end), but this feels rather melancholy--Like you don't accept the idea that this life we are mere children.
Are you hoping that death is the end? Or would you rather be something more beyond?
If we'll end up in a box in the ground--
Or if death is only the beginning.
Just don't be one to try to find out that answer too early~
Although the truth to this thought seemed like it should be optimistic (to some, if they expect death to be an end), but this feels rather melancholy--Like you don't accept the idea that this life we are mere children.
Are you hoping that death is the end? Or would you rather be something more beyond?
25th Sep 2014 5:53am
If death is an end or a beginning I just want to leave everything behind. I wish I could be anywhere else than where I am but life has a shitty way of working out, hopefully the day I die I'll feel at peace
