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Trans
Transcendent forms on
transmundane nebulosity
transact performances in
transgender aspirations.
Dreams and fears,
death on the cusp,
the trait of human kind
locked away,
nothing to see here.
*picture first.
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Re: Trans
23rd Mar 2014 9:38am
Imaginative interpretation of the painting!
the line:
"death on the cusp"
is breathtaking!
the line:
"death on the cusp"
is breathtaking!
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re: Re: Trans
23rd Mar 2014 9:54am
Re: Trans
23rd Mar 2014 9:50am
i took this one up
as I thought of gals and guys
in the
DUP
being forever
in TRANCE
LGBT KIND
as I thought of gals and guys
in the
DUP
being forever
in TRANCE
LGBT KIND
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re: Re: Trans
23rd Mar 2014 9:55am
Re: Trans
23rd Mar 2014 1:09pm
Re: Trans
Anonymous
23rd Mar 2014 3:16pm
It's a very interesting take on the picture. It's actually quite fascinating how one girl is uninterested and the other one seems curious.
You've captured it in a capsule in the following lines:
Dreams and fears,
death on the cusp,
You've captured it in a capsule in the following lines:
Dreams and fears,
death on the cusp,
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re: Re: Trans
23rd Mar 2014 4:56pm
Why thankyou Nikki
I believe all three were painted as transgender
how we as a human species still have hangups
about how another human should act or behave
what's perceived as normal in society
I believe all three were painted as transgender
how we as a human species still have hangups
about how another human should act or behave
what's perceived as normal in society
Re: Trans
24th Mar 2014 7:12am
Nothing is as it seems...we all have our secret lives and some have the courage to live them out in the open. Death is always on the cusp which makes it all the more important to find and be our true selves.
Well done Rose...thanks for the think :)
Well done Rose...thanks for the think :)
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re: Re: Trans
24th Mar 2014 8:02am
Re: Trans
24th Mar 2014 3:32pm
You always fascinate me with your poems when the picture comes first....
'the trait of human kind locked away' ...makes me think that they are seperated from everyone else.
'the trait of human kind locked away' ...makes me think that they are seperated from everyone else.
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re: Re: Trans
24th Mar 2014 3:45pm
Thank you Lena
lovely comments
and yes in a way they are seperated from people who have opinions on how other humans should act in society
live and let live
whatever peoples orientation to anything thats deemed "different"
one life as far as we know, live it however you choose
lovely comments
and yes in a way they are seperated from people who have opinions on how other humans should act in society
live and let live
whatever peoples orientation to anything thats deemed "different"
one life as far as we know, live it however you choose
Re: Trans
25th Mar 2014 8:27am
beautiful, Rose. we need to live our lives in the way that makes us most happy...
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re: Re: Trans
25th Mar 2014 1:01pm