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Respirator
I choked on the purest air and oxygen
Every step I took scraped and dragged
My eyes with bags
Filled with the death I longed for
Light shined onto me pitch black darkeness
I shut out the world and sumerged
What was left of me into the center of nothingness
Life...would be the death of me
And now Im breathing
And I'm living for the first time
Your heart is beating
Pumping life to my burst vine
A flatline was my mode of travel
Graveyard grass my choice of gravel
But now I smell, hear, feel, taste everything
And I can see the world
You breathe me life
-Liquid Mind
Every step I took scraped and dragged
My eyes with bags
Filled with the death I longed for
Light shined onto me pitch black darkeness
I shut out the world and sumerged
What was left of me into the center of nothingness
Life...would be the death of me
And now Im breathing
And I'm living for the first time
Your heart is beating
Pumping life to my burst vine
A flatline was my mode of travel
Graveyard grass my choice of gravel
But now I smell, hear, feel, taste everything
And I can see the world
You breathe me life
-Liquid Mind
Published 22nd Mar 2014
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22nd Mar 2014 10:31pm
Stepping up to a refreshed sense of life, you triumph with strength. The emotions are raw and felt deeply through your verses. nice ink* :)
Anonymous
22nd Mar 2014 11:07pm
oh wow, the last line just grabbed me BZ, that was excellent juxtaposition. Very well crafted piece from beginning to end the nature of sustaining life.
22nd Mar 2014 11:51pm
22nd Mar 2014 11:56pm
IMy goodness Nikki thankyou so much for reading...alot was put into this piece honestly...it makes me so happy that you got just as much out :-)
23rd Mar 2014 1:26am
:)
really cool write,
everything about it, this is a piece I can definitely relate to.
really cool write,
everything about it, this is a piece I can definitely relate to.
23rd Mar 2014 2:39am
Thankyou so much for reading Nikk :-) its sick that you can relate to it...Im glad :-)
