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All our life
It is when the door
starts to slowly open
within
our minds eye
it is then
with growing fear
we will have
to decide
will we hide
within
our House of cards
with our belief
of denile
that our belief
will last
or will the wave
of our imprisoned feelings
pass us
though the door
to a place
all our lifes
we have tried
to ignore
starts to slowly open
within
our minds eye
it is then
with growing fear
we will have
to decide
will we hide
within
our House of cards
with our belief
of denile
that our belief
will last
or will the wave
of our imprisoned feelings
pass us
though the door
to a place
all our lifes
we have tried
to ignore
Published 22nd Mar 2014
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22nd Mar 2014 3:53pm
22nd Mar 2014 3:55pm
22nd Mar 2014 10:18pm
There must be two decisions when we reach that Y in the road.
Always give them the first choice.
Always give them the first choice.
23rd Mar 2014 2:40pm
22nd Mar 2014 10:58pm
23rd Mar 2014 2:40pm
juz beautifully expressed drone like passing a resolution in various houses that rule us! whatever remains or flows out of this fourchambered sacred secret, still needs this eloquent mind's eye, if that discrete emotion is to last or pass on in ignorance..
simple n sweet .thankyou!
simple n sweet .thankyou!
24th Mar 2014 1:22pm
14th Feb 2019 8:31am
denial is self ignition
lives we all have to make--- our own decisions
you have lead us to a fresh muse
who would not love to your knowledge use
please do me excuse
lives we all have to make--- our own decisions
you have lead us to a fresh muse
who would not love to your knowledge use
please do me excuse
14th Feb 2019 10:21am
