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Let it rise
Let it rise
We must all praise
if we need a raise
so does your poetry amaze
emptiness it does portray
but imagination it
really does spray
empty shells
left behind
after the end
of the raise
I need no praise
you may yourself de-phrase
the emptiness stays
hollow feeling perhaps
when unfinished
one stays...
there are many
other ways!!!
We must all praise
if we need a raise
so does your poetry amaze
emptiness it does portray
but imagination it
really does spray
empty shells
left behind
after the end
of the raise
I need no praise
you may yourself de-phrase
the emptiness stays
hollow feeling perhaps
when unfinished
one stays...
there are many
other ways!!!
Published 21st Mar 2014
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22nd Mar 2014 10:19am
This is so sad. Need edging attention from that does not notice. I know this well. :(
22nd Mar 2014 12:10pm
