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LONGTIME LOVERS
Everyday my lover takes me out
sometimes we stay at his place
just me and him
I am most happy
when we spend time alone
Often he massages my entire body
on occasion he uses oil
captivated am I by the sensation
of strong hands sliding
along my soft, voluptuous curves
leaving no part untouched
inside I giggle when his fingers
run up and down my spine
I thrill as he reaches for his bow
beginning slowly
he glides his stiff stick
across my vibrating strings
contentedly I hum
suddenly he quickens his thrusts
in great drops his sweat lands on my skin
laboring so hard to please me
I moan louder and louder
finally screaming in utter ecstasy
overcome by emotion he weeps
thanking me for singing so beautifully
Frequently we go to big parties
we always get good seats
raised above the crowd
my lover looks handsome
always dressed in black tuxedo and bow tie
our host, a popular man, enters
the crowd cheers his arrival
he begins to wildly gesticulate
Under the host’s direction
we make sweet love
right there in front of hundreds
of approving onlookers
smiling I remember my first time in public
I was frozen by inhibition
until, I saw all around us
others locked in passions embrace
The host commands FASTER! FASTER!
until with a glorious climax
he motions for us to stop
the crowd, enraptured, roars
exhausted and yet still enthralled
we make our way home
I will rest a short while
until again my lover takes me out
sometimes we stay at his place
just me and him
I am most happy
when we spend time alone
Often he massages my entire body
on occasion he uses oil
captivated am I by the sensation
of strong hands sliding
along my soft, voluptuous curves
leaving no part untouched
inside I giggle when his fingers
run up and down my spine
I thrill as he reaches for his bow
beginning slowly
he glides his stiff stick
across my vibrating strings
contentedly I hum
suddenly he quickens his thrusts
in great drops his sweat lands on my skin
laboring so hard to please me
I moan louder and louder
finally screaming in utter ecstasy
overcome by emotion he weeps
thanking me for singing so beautifully
Frequently we go to big parties
we always get good seats
raised above the crowd
my lover looks handsome
always dressed in black tuxedo and bow tie
our host, a popular man, enters
the crowd cheers his arrival
he begins to wildly gesticulate
Under the host’s direction
we make sweet love
right there in front of hundreds
of approving onlookers
smiling I remember my first time in public
I was frozen by inhibition
until, I saw all around us
others locked in passions embrace
The host commands FASTER! FASTER!
until with a glorious climax
he motions for us to stop
the crowd, enraptured, roars
exhausted and yet still enthralled
we make our way home
I will rest a short while
until again my lover takes me out
Published 21st Mar 2014
| Edited 22nd Mar 2014
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21st Mar 2014 8:54am
21st Mar 2014 3:50pm
21st Mar 2014 12:37pm
I love the violin metaphor, and the fact that this poem is half private and half public loving.
21st Mar 2014 3:45pm
Thank you Raver! I thought the public part added some sensual risk taking to the mix...I am glad you liked the metaphor...music can be a super erotic thing.
21st Mar 2014 9:09pm
Oh, how stimulating. A fantasy thriller. Very sexy write, and the play on words is lovely :)
22nd Mar 2014 12:19pm
I am especially glad to have reached you with this piece. The appreciation of music is, for both of us, a deep and abiding love.
12th Jun 2018 7:33pm
12th Jun 2018 7:43pm
I knew you'd like the piece. I see that as a very sensual relationship. I think the curves were no accident in the design. Thank you for your kind words of encouragement!
11th Jun 2019 4:16am
You naughty boy! This one had dripping visuals & was steamy as hell. Thanks for this entry too!!
11th Jun 2019 7:37am
Thank you ma'am! I enjoyed writing this piece. I love music and I love sex so it was a perfect meld.
Anonymous
- Edited 24th Feb 2022 8:46pm
24th Feb 2022 8:36pm
Ahhh... What a beautifully interpreted metaphor!! You captured the voice of Lady Violin 🎻 so tremendously well. What a fun, sexy, provocatively glorious read.... I adore where you took the reader... Bravo, my dear BB!!!
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🐻💋🐇
xo
👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻 👏🏻
🌹 - 💙
🐻💋🐇
xo
25th Feb 2022 7:11pm
What a delicious commentary, "provocatively glorious" oh my, oh my 🌹
Thank you much my Goddess BB❣❣
Thank you much my Goddess BB❣❣
24th Feb 2022 8:43pm
25th Feb 2022 7:19pm
Hello, Wired❣❣
I am well...how are you? Your profile pic is stunning ✨
I am super-chuffed that you enjoy this piece. The writing of it was a glorious experience.
I am well...how are you? Your profile pic is stunning ✨
I am super-chuffed that you enjoy this piece. The writing of it was a glorious experience.
25th Feb 2022 7:26pm
