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Look to the Skies
Trinkets hang from my soul
chiming to the inner winds
A tone of wanting love
sweet melody of bring her to me
to cast light upon my mornings
a smile that is coffee to my heart
eyes that seduce my innocent thoughts
within arms that speak everything is ok
love beyond the bedroom
through covers of our souls
deep into the softness of our bedding
sharing the intimacy of our naked souls
A bond forged of distant tears
That falls into similar ground
Turning tainted soil of the past
To fertile grounds of hope
The ground of our very existence
Scars of a path that cuts deep
Cleansed by tears of shared pain
Bathing in the comforts we keep
Opening eyes to finally breathe again
The scent of the vision of love
Thanks to the garden of flowers
That extends to the castle above
(With great respect to Flower Girl, This is a version of her amazing poem “Castle of Dreams” in my words). She has helped bring such tenderness to my poetry, forever grateful.
chiming to the inner winds
A tone of wanting love
sweet melody of bring her to me
to cast light upon my mornings
a smile that is coffee to my heart
eyes that seduce my innocent thoughts
within arms that speak everything is ok
love beyond the bedroom
through covers of our souls
deep into the softness of our bedding
sharing the intimacy of our naked souls
A bond forged of distant tears
That falls into similar ground
Turning tainted soil of the past
To fertile grounds of hope
The ground of our very existence
Scars of a path that cuts deep
Cleansed by tears of shared pain
Bathing in the comforts we keep
Opening eyes to finally breathe again
The scent of the vision of love
Thanks to the garden of flowers
That extends to the castle above
(With great respect to Flower Girl, This is a version of her amazing poem “Castle of Dreams” in my words). She has helped bring such tenderness to my poetry, forever grateful.
Published 18th Mar 2014
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18th Mar 2014 5:44pm
Awe Soul......you have graced upon my words such beauty. You have inspired my pen often. I am more than honored by this beautiful tribute. Thank you my friend. RL for me. Xo :)
18th Mar 2014 7:22pm
IT is the beauty of so many that has charged my pen to a new level, you are one of them. To be one you must first become one. I want to be a writer that can inspire, you all encourage this journey. There is a piece of everyone of you in my writing.
18th Mar 2014 5:46pm
Goodness! This ink was divine, ASoul!
"love beyond the bedroom
through covers of our souls
deep into the softness of our bedding
sharing the intimacy of our naked souls
A bond forged of distant tears
That falls into similar ground
Turning tainted soil of the past
To fertile grounds of hope"<--gotta' crush on these two stanzas. Beautifully written
"love beyond the bedroom
through covers of our souls
deep into the softness of our bedding
sharing the intimacy of our naked souls
A bond forged of distant tears
That falls into similar ground
Turning tainted soil of the past
To fertile grounds of hope"<--gotta' crush on these two stanzas. Beautifully written
18th Mar 2014 7:25pm
Rain, touched with your presence alone, it is a gift in it's self. To catch your breathe is a dream. Thank you so much for your comments.
18th Mar 2014 6:43pm
so majestically beautiful! I'm sure Flower is over the moon with this soul touching ink :) with love and respect Crim
18th Mar 2014 7:29pm
She effortlessly displays boundless love into her work, something I desired but rarely (in my opinion) thought I captured well. This makes your comment so valuable as it supports personal goals. thanks as always Crim for your loving comments and sharing some of your valuable time reading my work.
18th Mar 2014 7:31pm
she is very loving and she and other poets inspire me as well as you to seek a more delicate hand with which to create our art.. with love Crim :)
18th Mar 2014 7:37pm
some great lines like "coffee to my heart"
and a beautiful flourish with the last two verses - much enjoyed!
and a beautiful flourish with the last two verses - much enjoyed!
18th Mar 2014 7:40pm
19th Mar 2014 1:09am
nice tender write. it's always important for love to proceed beyond the bedroom...
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19th Mar 2014 1:56pm
Oh wow, this is exquisitely composed and it drips with her soft poetic graces. I much adore this tribute.., Standing ovations for the both of you complimenting styles...:)
19th Mar 2014 2:00pm
30th Apr 2014 5:52pm
lovely tribute..deeply evocative ink.. beautiful..just beautiful...with deepest respect..domore
Thank you Domore, you have captured the very essence of this ink.
Honored to have the pleasure to dwell among your treasures.
Honored to have the pleasure to dwell among your treasures.
