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"Serenity"
Adrift in the doldrums of
loneliness
I searched for hope
on a sea polluted with those who take and never give, only
themselves
in excess
will they ever please
Adorned in Sun streaked golden hair
she appears on the horizon
as a gentle breeze
passing over this sea of
selfish
humanity where
I
is in abundant supply
Her heart holds others in such high regard
Selfless, compassionate, a kindred spirit
Capable of caring, even for those adrift
'Serenity' a name most fitting
She fills my empty sail
Propels me away from the
self-
*off* centered
environment that began to consume me
Rescued by this genuine, giant hearted lass
Forevermore to follow her example
A debt which can only be
repaid in sharing
.
loneliness
I searched for hope
on a sea polluted with those who take and never give, only
themselves
in excess
will they ever please
Adorned in Sun streaked golden hair
she appears on the horizon
as a gentle breeze
passing over this sea of
selfish
humanity where
I
is in abundant supply
Her heart holds others in such high regard
Selfless, compassionate, a kindred spirit
Capable of caring, even for those adrift
'Serenity' a name most fitting
She fills my empty sail
Propels me away from the
self-
*off* centered
environment that began to consume me
Rescued by this genuine, giant hearted lass
Forevermore to follow her example
A debt which can only be
repaid in sharing
.
Published 18th Mar 2014
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18th Mar 2014 4:56pm
Beautiful words you have honored this Lass with. She sounds like a beautiful soul to have come your way. Perfect to lay your weary heart upon. Honored she is to have found you. Luv this! RL for me. :)
Sweet flowergirl, thank you for your support, and the RL nod.
This was written about four months after our initial introduction. It was the only time I have ever written something, then presented it as a gift.
She was so overwhelmed with emotion. I soon followed.
Several days later she arrived with a sheet of card stock, 16"x20". She hired a local printer to apply my words in a beautiful calligraphy style font. She requested I sign and
date it, with the date when we first met.
She had it professionally framed. It hangs in her foyer by the front door.
As is her nature, a gift to me in return, a gift far exceeding my feeble words.
This was written about four months after our initial introduction. It was the only time I have ever written something, then presented it as a gift.
She was so overwhelmed with emotion. I soon followed.
Several days later she arrived with a sheet of card stock, 16"x20". She hired a local printer to apply my words in a beautiful calligraphy style font. She requested I sign and
date it, with the date when we first met.
She had it professionally framed. It hangs in her foyer by the front door.
As is her nature, a gift to me in return, a gift far exceeding my feeble words.
18th Mar 2014 5:40pm
Fantastic story you have shared with me. Thank you for honoring me with such a personal share. Brilliant! :)
18th Mar 2014 5:43pm
18th Mar 2014 6:45pm
VP what a beautiful soul of a lass she must be to have inspired such tenderness in you.. I love this a gift from your heart that is priceless! :) with love and respect Crim
18th Mar 2014 7:39pm
Lovely Crim, thank you for your insightful remarks.
She is a beautiful soul.
These events occurred nearly eleven years ago, not long after Dad passed on, while I was still in a funk. *still am most days* ;)
Her and I remain close.
She is a beautiful soul.
These events occurred nearly eleven years ago, not long after Dad passed on, while I was still in a funk. *still am most days* ;)
Her and I remain close.
17th Jul 2014 10:43pm
Beautifully done Mr VP.... you have a masterful way of expressing yourself.. these lines proof of my statement..with love and respect..xoxo domore
18th Jul 2014 3:46am
With sincere thankfulness I acknowledge your diligence in searching my archives, dear Lass. :)
Your sweet comments are always uplifting.
Thanxxxxx :)
Your sweet comments are always uplifting.
Thanxxxxx :)
