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"The Detrimental Conflict of Souls once Fused now Rent into."

 Do you see what you loathe in my eyes...
Not yet, "Fuck," I'll try harder next time
cause I know that you used to look into
them and said, you fell in love with what
could be seen within the mirrors that they
are; casting reflections of the shape of my
soul

But so many things are not now as they
were and the warmth of the hearth that
once burned is smoldering ashes waiting
for the winds to blow through and scatter
them

So many aspects of those who have become
one are now intentionally unrequited: such
as Love, Kindness, selflessness and when you
should look on the needs of the other, you act
towards me like you've been blinded and deem
your own self to be better

This way isn't how the gods of nature intended
it to be...
We are not one above the other but have been
united so that our spirits are infused into one
and through this unification we two are one soul

And through the procreative action of intercourse
we create a new spirit that is of our soul and is
clothed with elements of the earth

Dirt of, "Gaia
Skin that resembles animals that walk on all four

But two souls can be rent into and an schism in
the order ensues

Why do we wonder why we feel like shit when we
are torn asunder, one from the other

Feelings within both male and female go into an
psychotic, depressed, tumultuous frenzy; and into
ineffable misery

But in the haste of anger we say,
"Do you see what you loathe in my eyes...
Not yet, "Fuck," I'll try harder next time
cause I know that you used to look into
them and said, you fell in love with what
could be seen within the mirrors that they
are; casting reflections of the shape of my
soul

But so many things are not now as they
were and the warmth of the hearth that
once burned is smoldering ashes waiting
for the winds to blow through and scatter
them to the farthest reaches of every direction

Inanna,(circa 4000BCE), was the Sumerian Goddess
of the moon,  known as Queen of Heaven
and Goddess of gentle rains and terrible floods,
Goddess of the morning and evening star, Queen
of the land and its fertility. She was the
Goddess of war and equally passionately, the
Goddess of sexual love.



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