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hate when she's this way
still seething in frigid lust
yet beckoning life
Written by
LobodeSanPedro
Published
11th Mar 2014
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dartford
(Paul S...)
11th Mar 2014 11:44am
love the frustration
in this..:)
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LobodeSanPedro
11th Mar 2014 10:16pm
Frustration is the operative word ... Thanks for the read and feedback
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Utopia
- Edited 11th Mar 2014 4:24pm
11th Mar 2014 4:18pm
I'm constantly changing from calm to hell
Madness fills my heart and soul
As if the great divide could swallow me whole
moving on is a bitch.
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LobodeSanPedro
11th Mar 2014 10:19pm
"calm to hell ... moving on is a bitch" ... You've felt this wrath as well I see ...
... Thank you for the feedback ... It's much appreciated
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
- Edited 12th Mar 2014 12:20pm
11th Mar 2014 7:07pm
[...] seething in frigid lust [...]
A powerful line, ruling the whole poem. An emotional senryu for sure!
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LobodeSanPedro
11th Mar 2014 10:22pm
It's a cold soul that cripples every fiber ... Thank you as always for your commentary Miss Chi
Salud
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