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chalk dust
to dust...

we're in
such a state...

So glad you appreciate the commentary ... Thanks for the read

Salud

Really great write Lobo - this neo-haiku you and Deptford Paul are working is maturing and deserves a wider audience

Thank you whale.  I take satisfaction in knowing people like you and Paul read and appreciate the work.  I also received word from the editors of Haibun Today that they will be publishing a piece of mine this summer.  The poem actually grew out of a competition here on DUP.

Salud

Really excellent and here's to more to come!