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Perfect Fit
I want to kiss and hold your hand
then move down south and explore your land
I want to lick and suck your dick
then drink your cream so sweet and slick
I want to fuck and then make love
you' re the perfect fit just like a glove ♡♡♡
then move down south and explore your land
I want to lick and suck your dick
then drink your cream so sweet and slick
I want to fuck and then make love
you' re the perfect fit just like a glove ♡♡♡
Published 3rd Mar 2014
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Anonymous
3rd Mar 2014 8:48pm
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4th Mar 2014 1:45am
Thank you for your comment. This poem seemed to just flow out of me.....♡♡♡ :)
3rd Mar 2014 9:24pm
Wow! You wouldn't be horny would you? LOL!!! He isn't about to turn you down on this one. Mmmmmm! HOT! :)
You are so right, flowergirl-- I do my best erotic writing when I am in
a certain "frame of mind"..... ♡♡♡I am really glad you thought of it as hot.....
Thank you for your encouraging words!
a certain "frame of mind"..... ♡♡♡I am really glad you thought of it as hot.....
Thank you for your encouraging words!
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4th Mar 2014 6:21am
The title is appropriate in more then one way as your words all fit together so well. Vivid word pictures and yet a strong element of grace.
5th Mar 2014 10:44pm
Thank you for your praise and for getting this poem exactly how it was meant.... :) It is indeed a perfect fit on many levels.... ;) ♡♡♡
4th Mar 2014 9:59pm
9th Mar 2014 7:42pm
I saw your comment just now.....
Thank you kindly--Glad you enjoyed.... ;)
Thank you kindly--Glad you enjoyed.... ;)
5th Mar 2014 1:24am
Incredible scarlet, writing such a so hot poem, with perfect metered rhyme! Wonderful sexy ink!!!
5th Mar 2014 10:46pm
I feel flattered that you think my little poem sexy and hot....
It is in the erotic section and so I am happy to know it served its purpose...... ;) ♡♡♡
It is in the erotic section and so I am happy to know it served its purpose...... ;) ♡♡♡
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18th Mar 2014 6:18am
Thank you for your compliment.....being that this poem is in the erotic section, I am taking your comment as a compliment, and hope it has the same effect on the person it was written for..... ;)♡♡♡
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20th Mar 2014 4:54am
I am grateful for you and all the other poets sharing ourselves creatively here at DU......:) ♡♡♡
20th Mar 2014 5:13am
Anonymous
4th Apr 2014 6:05am
Licking, sucking, drinking sweet cream, fitting together perfectly..these lines are dripping with hot passion! I can't pick a favorite line, they range from sweet romance to lusty sex, it's all here. The beauty and diversity of two passionate lovers is on display, and it's definitely affected me..a standing ovation ;)
5th Apr 2014 4:52am
A standing ovation! This flatters me greatly and I am delighted my little poem affected you in such a delightful way......! ♡♡♡
