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Sowing Seeds
And so it was written
beneath the apple tree
sewing lace
viewing my delicacy
making webs
translucent in the light
If not for our flushed
unveiling no one would
have known what had
transpired upon the table
within his web
beneath the apple tree
sewing lace
viewing my delicacy
making webs
translucent in the light
If not for our flushed
unveiling no one would
have known what had
transpired upon the table
within his web
Published 3rd Mar 2014
| Edited 4th Mar 2014
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3rd Mar 2014 1:55pm
3rd Mar 2014 1:58pm
yes the artwork came first
the couple in it second I believe hehe
kidding aside the artwork is amazing, truly is
the couple in it second I believe hehe
kidding aside the artwork is amazing, truly is
3rd Mar 2014 9:27pm
3rd Mar 2014 9:32pm
Yes Mr Hawk i can imagine what sowing you were referring too
hehe
Enough to make that statue blush!
hehe
Enough to make that statue blush!
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3rd Mar 2014 2:33pm
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3rd Mar 2014 2:38pm
3rd Mar 2014 5:03pm
A very decadent sexy write :) wrapped in his web love the picture as well Rose.. much love Crim
3rd Mar 2014 5:12pm
3rd Mar 2014 7:18pm
Very simplistic and nicely written-- reminds me of the style of authors of old -- Emily Dickinson, Louisa May Alcott, etc .
3rd Mar 2014 7:32pm
3rd Mar 2014 8:26pm
3rd Mar 2014 8:43pm
3rd Mar 2014 9:49pm
I love the air of forbidden sensuality in a conservative Victorian setting. I just searched up some more of Marcus Stone's art...I love his work :) And your work, Rose, as well :)
4th Mar 2014 6:16am
3rd Mar 2014 11:41pm
I love the understated erotica to this ... Making the seemingly unthinkable possible in the most unimaginable places ... Bravo!
4th Mar 2014 6:17am
Sensual undertones
did they or didn't they
or what did they do I'd anything :)
did they or didn't they
or what did they do I'd anything :)
9th Mar 2014 3:46am
9th Mar 2014 7:20pm
16th Mar 2014 7:11am
this is a very elegant & bawdy write. she was content to tend to her sewing, but he had other thoughts entirely (can't blame the guy)...
16th Mar 2014 8:41am
