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Serenade
A serenade for my solicitude
analgesic for the taste of longing
empower me to correlation
souls serene
*picture first
analgesic for the taste of longing
empower me to correlation
souls serene
*picture first
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2nd Mar 2014 12:38pm
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2nd Mar 2014 1:19pm
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2nd Mar 2014 2:09pm
aww thankyou
love looking at paintings
if they can inspire me to write then even better
love looking at paintings
if they can inspire me to write then even better
Re: Serenade
2nd Mar 2014 3:58pm
Rose you have the touch of your namesake like delicate petals raining down on me is your writing and pic a perfect reflection of you poem.. much love Crim :)
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2nd Mar 2014 5:05pm
Aww crim thankyou for beautiful comments
coming from such a well versed poet as yourself I'm honored indeed xD
coming from such a well versed poet as yourself I'm honored indeed xD
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2nd Mar 2014 4:00pm
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I think you are right Hash
plus the yearning for the love that lies beyond the wooden fence
sharing the blissful moments they share
though again everyone to their own interpretations
plus the yearning for the love that lies beyond the wooden fence
sharing the blissful moments they share
though again everyone to their own interpretations
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Anonymous
2nd Mar 2014 6:00pm
The picture and the write are such perfect compliments, beautiful scribe Rose.
btw, I like the font, gives it such delicacy.
btw, I like the font, gives it such delicacy.
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2nd Mar 2014 7:54pm
Yes i chose this font for this very reason xD
Thankyou Vee
lovely commenting
Thankyou Vee
lovely commenting
Re: Serenade
2nd Mar 2014 9:12pm
Beautiful Rose. I love the second line. The sad look of deep longing on this gorgeous woman's face. The fence, to me, represents the sometime seemingly insurmountable obstacle to finding true love
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2nd Mar 2014 9:16pm