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FAITH
Faithful come, succumb and crumble
A shadow on a mirror on a puddle
A pungent remnant of this perfumed tune
As I sing a song to me
Fragile chords bind to ford a stream
Of failed reflection yet we dream
To seek to find and speak of a love eternal
As I sing a song to you
Here a harpies harp jars a fallen glass
Hold the line and let time pass
Hold each other and grasp a love eternal
As I sing a song to us
A shadow on a mirror on a puddle
A pungent remnant of this perfumed tune
As I sing a song to me
Fragile chords bind to ford a stream
Of failed reflection yet we dream
To seek to find and speak of a love eternal
As I sing a song to you
Here a harpies harp jars a fallen glass
Hold the line and let time pass
Hold each other and grasp a love eternal
As I sing a song to us
Published 1st Mar 2014
| Edited 9th Mar 2014
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Anonymous
6th Mar 2014 8:14pm
That was great, I really thought it suited the Hotel california song....Always sang it allong, still do!
6th Mar 2014 10:15pm
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9th Mar 2014 11:50am
9th Mar 2014 6:56pm
Beautifully inked Faith, Whale! Your wordplay is incredible in this piece.Xo
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9th Mar 2014 7:01pm
17th Jul 2014 6:47pm
I love the repetitions of the last lines of each stanza denoting togetherness in the end-- enjoying the bliss of an eternal love!
18th Jul 2014 00:46am
