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sinners we
sinners we
thank you .I like all to read what I compose and comment on it, as also its my duty to pay regards in return .What we all do is just tick and read and pass on, but never say a word of appreciation nor offer constructive criticism which I feel we ought to do On another site daily I get 700 reviews only simply because I acknowledge every comment. Hope this will help do feel free to ask me anything if you feel I have stepped out of my domain, do say I shall refrain
Thanks Jazz and M
You are a great guy
who doesn't fall easily
and least of all
in the last category
I know you do enjoy doing it
sin if you please,...to enjoy life
we must ensure
three or four things
like,
Smile and laugh
Humor yourself as well as others
and
Regularly sin
Solo or bed polo
anything
would do
if it's okay by you...
count me in too
Published 1st Mar 2014
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- Edited 11th May 2018 11:47am
1st Mar 2014 4:51pm
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2nd Mar 2014 3:58am
1st Mar 2014 6:42pm
2nd Mar 2014 3:57am
1st Mar 2014 7:34pm
always felt you
enriched this joint
just by being here
best when confrontational
whether or not intentional
this site has sight
and any slight
has been slight
enriched this joint
just by being here
best when confrontational
whether or not intentional
this site has sight
and any slight
has been slight
2nd Mar 2014 3:56am
