I really enjoy your style of writing. You place such strong descriptive words making every reader interpret the poem in a different way. I love that they are so short, but have such a heavy impact. They get my thoughts flowing. Thanks for the gory burst of ispiration.
lol ... When I reread this piece after seeing you had commented on it - I almost forgot the underlying meaning myself ...
After the horrid winter we just had there were 8 foot mounds of frozen snow covered with soot and dirt that made them look like granite ... yet if one looked close enough there were also green spring buds emerging on the trees blowing on the last breath of winter ...