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In A Box
Tell me again, how I’ve got it wrong.
The liturgy plays endlessly in my head
but I’m sure you have your finger on it.
Tell me how my patience is transparent
with wear, and how I forget the milk.
I’m sure I meant to ride to work today…
Tell me the world is hard, and to grow
a thicker skin, for when they put the knives in.
I need epiphany in a box, so wrap it up to go.
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Re: In A Box
26th Feb 2014 9:53pm
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27th Feb 2014 1:53pm
Re: In A Box
Concisely put, it makes me want coffee for some reason ... does good to drop by
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27th Feb 2014 1:54pm
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26th Feb 2014 10:50pm
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27th Feb 2014 1:55pm
Re: In A Box
26th Feb 2014 11:41pm
I can feel your rage simmering tightly woven in this brilliant ink Atakti masterfully done with love and respect Crim
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re: Re: In A Box
27th Feb 2014 1:55pm
You felt it, huh?
You're right, Crim, this one was penned in the green ink of ire.
Thanks, dearest Crim...
You're right, Crim, this one was penned in the green ink of ire.
Thanks, dearest Crim...
Re: In A Box
Anonymous
27th Feb 2014 3:57am
Epiphanies in a box? They got those at Crate & Barrel! Make great gifts! Another hit! Mike.

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re: Re: In A Box
27th Feb 2014 1:57pm
Order a few dozen, we'll hawk 'em at the spring fair...
Many thanks, Mike, appreciate your visits.
Many thanks, Mike, appreciate your visits.
Re: In A Box
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2014 11:46am
I can't sell you any knives. Your poem box is full of them. :) Keen shine.

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Re: In A Box
Anonymous
4th Mar 2014 11:56am
Ahm, one box? Id say at least a dozen!
Ill have one, thanks!
Ill have one, thanks!

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8th Mar 2014 12:32pm