CHARITY

lol...enjoyed the ending--lil surprise twist! :)

Hey thanks niknshell for the cool comment and yep I left a little snap in the tail!

Awesome write

brown rice or other ?

thanks PS - jellof is my soulfood

Words are meaningless unless there's action, feeling or ambition behind them. So saying, you're correct, rice is indeed better. Nice piece!

Big thanks Donovan for the comment and welcome to DU

sweeeeet kharitea exists everywhar u look in dis wun!  rM

Roachmeister my brethren - missed u - yep sweet charity

Nice sentiments Whale, reminds me of that story in the great novel 'bout the old woman who put a penny in the basket, it was worth more than all the notes cos it was her last penny ..or some such words.  Clever ending

anyhow, good stuff, easy read and understood

shine on

Really happy you stopped by and with your comment - I liked that old lady best of all to

Hey Gabriel a proper Angel comment - thanks for the support

oh I really like this,
the ending is sublime,
although I'm more of
an egg fried man, myself..:)

Presuming rice not noodles - big thanks for supportive comment :)

"Give secretly,
Not strategically"

Speaks to those who give merely as a tax-saving device, and to curry favours of certain groups.

absolutely - the wisdom of solomon - much appreciated

I like the simplicity of it....& I get it...

Thank you for commenting - much appreciated

A great poem and indeed, charity in some cases doesnt feed. I work for a big charity organisation which happily does feed people.
Giving is in the heart!

Thanks Mourganna for this lovely comment - good hearts create good things

Charity... lovely

See thru the eyes of grace