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Paris Texas
she needs it, she prays for it
her primal passion
in bed, on her back
legs raised, bent at the knees
a bas relief, glamorous grief
she’s not a whore, she just wants more
her heathen delight: the might, the spike of a man
in the vee of her sight
desire measured in inches
like dashes on a map
every inch is a mile
every lunge is a smile
then flip her like a nickel
the backside of romance
round as a penny tight as a drum
sweet hell in the go, & heaven to come
she gyrates, then rotates
to gaze at the storm
takes the juice on her face, in her mouth
creamy & wicked & warm
she’s the maja, a madonna
she is beautiful
every dream is a woman
every woman is a dream
Published 24th Feb 2014
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24th Feb 2014 8:45am
24th Feb 2014 10:44am
then flip her like a nickel
the backside of romance
round as a penny tight as a drum
sweet hell in the go, & heaven to come
hehe go you :)
great lines and scribe
the backside of romance
round as a penny tight as a drum
sweet hell in the go, & heaven to come
hehe go you :)
great lines and scribe
24th Feb 2014 12:34pm
A beautiful erotic poem without these lines:
she gyrates, then rotates
to gaze at the storm
takes the juice on her face, in her mouth
creamy & wicked & warm
I know you write superbly, but that stanza sticks out like a sore ... on your otherwise beautiful poem.
But then again, "Paris Texas" suits the poem just as it is ...
I still like it, John.
she gyrates, then rotates
to gaze at the storm
takes the juice on her face, in her mouth
creamy & wicked & warm
I know you write superbly, but that stanza sticks out like a sore ... on your otherwise beautiful poem.
But then again, "Paris Texas" suits the poem just as it is ...
I still like it, John.
24th Feb 2014 12:43pm
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24th Feb 2014 8:24pm
Poetic dreamer with sensual eyes this is openly wanton, beautiful write John much love Crim
24th Feb 2014 10:17pm
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15th Mar 2014 00:16am
What a provocative read John.. Sensually hot as always! The painting speaks of herself...
