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Until we feel
Eyelashes covered in dust
Stitches hold mouths closed
So lying words can't spill out
We feel nothing
Until we wanna feel
Holding onto things we don't have
We die without love
Stitches hold mouths closed
So lying words can't spill out
We feel nothing
Until we wanna feel
Holding onto things we don't have
We die without love
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Re: Until we feel
24th Feb 2014 2:04am
I know this one doll. Very well.
"Holding onto things we don't have
We die without love"
Gotcha! Trying to get around that one. Thank you TL. XO
"Holding onto things we don't have
We die without love"
Gotcha! Trying to get around that one. Thank you TL. XO
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re: Re: Until we feel
24th Feb 2014 2:32am
It's like a maze, trying to find the right way but running into dead ends. But the light is shining in the right direction...I see it. Thank you for your eyes Twitch. XO
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24th Feb 2014 2:47am
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24th Feb 2014 2:52am
Re: Until we feel
24th Feb 2014 5:42am
re: Re: Until we feel
24th Feb 2014 1:08pm
Re: Until we feel
I'm with my bro twitch on this T... Stay positive n as beautiful as you've always been n unless the guy is a damn fool
he's gonna fall all over himself to be with you! :)
P.S... "Stiches?" Should be "Stitches" ok?
he's gonna fall all over himself to be with you! :)
P.S... "Stiches?" Should be "Stitches" ok?
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re: Re: Until we feel
24th Feb 2014 1:42pm
Damn, thank you for the correction, :)
I always appreciate you reading me Poetikmind,
and thanks for your kind words.
I always appreciate you reading me Poetikmind,
and thanks for your kind words.
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24th Feb 2014 1:46pm
Re: Until we feel
24th Feb 2014 8:14pm
Tommie a most heartfelt write written in such beautiful, poignant form.. keep you head up lovely on :) much love Crim
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