Fucking Feelings

*whips out the monster steel* c'mere n  imma beat dat ass!!
*she screams out with each power stroke after stroke*
Oooooohhhhhmmmmyyyy fffuuuccckkkk, aaayyyiiihhh!!
*finally exasperated, she drops* lol... There there now, all better? :)
The rant is raw n dark n expressed powerfully

thank you Poe for the cyber beat down :) much love Crim

thank you Ricky for getting this poem and Crim :)

very different from usual pieces ...
like the transition through out ..its nice that we have an outlet
for hysterical feelings ...

keep Rollin

cyanide..

thank you Cyanide yes it is a different side of me :) much love Crim

It's like you crawled inside my head! Feeling this very VERY deep Crim, thanks for sharing. ;)

thank you Tommie for getting this one.. much love Crim :)

This may sound redundant, but awesome as always. I totally get the alternate personality thing. Like the Malki in me. sometimes i'm stalkin around just like that and Dale's(me) sitting in the corner watching Malki look for something to break. Good shit!

thank you for being able to understand this poem even when a part of me doesn't.. much love Crim

Crimson rises from ignored pain needed
No forced knee now makes a fist of anger
On the prowl for a bloody feast
For a hunt of one who can defeat
Sucking Crim from her very veins
For Brenda to rise on her knees again

As always your writes have impact and meaning.

Soul you see me so well did I ever tell you how much I love your poem comments? :) much love Crim

yeah I know it.

thank you for getting this poem.. with regards Crim

I feel your rage,crimsin and hear your scream way over here :)

thank you Hash though it's boiled over now I think.. it felt good to get it out of my system :) much love Crim

All parts of the same animal Lady Crim. I used to think I had "sides" to me until I realised that they are all solid parts of who I am that rise when their name is called. Makes it difficult when we can't see why they were called though. You've had a lot going on lately. Easy to say from here I know, but with time your peace will come lovely Crim. Sending power your way.

thank you TS all parts of who we really are thank you for your insight and thoughtful comment you are deeply appreciated :) much love Crim

Powerful write sweet Lady. Can relate to this vent. I've learned not to try and control the muse that hides within but to let it flow as it wants. Enjoyed the honesty and sharing of your sweet soul. :)

thank you beautiful Flower for seeing me as tender even when I can't see in myself at times :) much love Crim

Let her roar baby! This was a rip-stomppin good one Crim!

Red  

thank you lovely Red :) much love Crim

Fuck!!!!!!!!!!! Crimson ... ohhhhh fuck me. my. god i visualized you releasing this beast in bed and forgive me for being under you during this sadistic daydream. you leave my body aching. craving for you to victimize me. im going to log off after reading jon rot next and fuck myself to the thought of you tearing into someones throat. you once again made me wanna cum

Mistress Of Darkness you made my week with your sizzling comment.. mmm ever so tasty thinking of you ;) love Crim

thank you for such an insightful comment Bolt :) much love Crim

A very graphic and
primal write Crim

I'm beginning to realize
that we these aspects
of our nature and that
they are urges that need
to be expressed or we'll
implode

I recently watched, "The
Purge," and your scribe
reminded me of it.

thank you Pan for reading me and getting the need to write it out or get it out somehow these feelings and urges we have.. much love Crim

interesting... the fire that fuels you. Brilliantly powerful :) The lioness is very hungry* Devouring this...

yes I'm famished thank you for getting that beautiful Angel :) much love Crim

A powerful write Crim and the best wasy to beat the crap out of those feelings is through ink for me.... or a good workout lol.

Great stuff. :)

thank you Magdalena yes writing and working out are great for getting those aggressive feelings out :) much love Crim

Damn Lady Crim....


Serioyusly you need to perform these peices... and take it to S& M erotica ... a new level!


LOOOOOOve this!


XOXO
Fire

I've never thought of performing in public but thank you for the awesome comment and vote of confidence beautiful lady :) much love Crim