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Love is a silent admission
of two souls
meeting as
one glued to another
and so be it
silent love!
only angels can dare
to indulge
in the inner sin
with total abandon
with joy
and
produce a replica
a boy
a finality of culmination
all ahoy!
Love is a silent admission
of two souls
meeting as
one glued to another
and so be it
silent love!
only angels can dare
to indulge
in the inner sin
with total abandon
with joy
and
produce a replica
a boy
a finality of culmination
all ahoy!
Published 23rd Feb 2014
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23rd Feb 2014 7:57pm
Your poetry is for the most part very open to interpretation -- this one I took an intuitive liking to and enjoyed reading it very much.... :)
24th Feb 2014 4:35am
Indirectly erotic no!
when poetry was portrayed
before Kin
READ THE BALANCE AT MY RESIDENCE
when poetry was portrayed
before Kin
READ THE BALANCE AT MY RESIDENCE
23rd Feb 2014 10:43pm
This was quite lovely. I really enjoyed the lines
only angels can dare
to indulge
in the inner sin
with total abandon
These are words I could nourish my mind on.
only angels can dare
to indulge
in the inner sin
with total abandon
These are words I could nourish my mind on.
24th Feb 2014 4:10am
