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You

I heard the I love bit, loud and soul satisfyingly clear,    
It's the you bit that got lost, I wasn't listening, sorry,    
I was someplace else with you, I'm not saying where,    
but lets just say my hand was squeezing yours tightly    
as you said you loved me all over again.
 
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