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crushing roses
crushing roses
Wow,
your poetry is by far the best here
it tears me apart
when I see it classified
as erotic
without an iota of eroticism
visual
all imagination
think eroticism for yourself
you seem to say
in your own fancied
imaginative way
so it seems
a lovely rosy dream
being crushed between the seems
Wow,
your poetry is by far the best here
it tears me apart
when I see it classified
as erotic
without an iota of eroticism
visual
all imagination
think eroticism for yourself
you seem to say
in your own fancied
imaginative way
so it seems
a lovely rosy dream
being crushed between the seems
Published 21st Feb 2014
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21st Feb 2014 5:10pm
Awe! You are too kind. You're awesome!!! This is a great write off....I'm honored. Thank you! :)
22nd Feb 2014 00:19am
a poet can only be honored
by another ...
you are my maker
of sophisticated exotic
erotic poetry
so tis!
thanks flowery friend
the world stands
behind great poets
one is you....
by another ...
you are my maker
of sophisticated exotic
erotic poetry
so tis!
thanks flowery friend
the world stands
behind great poets
one is you....
21st Feb 2014 11:37pm
22nd Feb 2014 00:24am
22nd Feb 2014 4:23am
Now you got me considering a recent erotic poem of mine...... I classified it as erotic because it contained a certain word -- wonder how else I could have classified it -- love maybe...
The write wasn't really super erotic so I will consider changing its category -- maybe...... ;)
The write wasn't really super erotic so I will consider changing its category -- maybe...... ;)
