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my soul
the dark forsaken winds of my soul
lifeless I'm the only one
I'm siting thinking
how did this happen
why did this happen
is it possable to fix
or will I die a torcherd soul
waiting for answers as I sit here
I just what to know
is it really too much to ask?
lifeless I'm the only one
I'm siting thinking
how did this happen
why did this happen
is it possable to fix
or will I die a torcherd soul
waiting for answers as I sit here
I just what to know
is it really too much to ask?
Published 27th Feb 2011
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16th Apr 2014 3:39pm
Deep and expressive. I like it!
Because you asked for honest critique, I'll give a little: be sure to watch your spelling. Spellcheck knows everything! :)
Great job! I hope to read more of your work soon!
Because you asked for honest critique, I'll give a little: be sure to watch your spelling. Spellcheck knows everything! :)
Great job! I hope to read more of your work soon!
