Bloody Rain

a prayer for battle - the beginning of the end
a great start to my day

thank you for the beautiful comment Whale.. much love Crim :)

outstanding, Crim. you're the Joan of Arc of our underground...

thank you John for the touching comment :) much love Crim

Oh, savage and powerful, I love it!

thank you Atakti for giving this poem some love and an add to your list I'm humbled :) much love Crim

Such a great poem, Warrior soul spirit!
Weave on!

thank you lovely lady :) much love Crim

A ritual, what a powerful write

thank you Soul your visits are always deeply appreciated :) much love Crim

you express raw power with such eloquence, Brenda. bravissimo bella poeta.

Thank you Beautiful Mia you always touch my heart with your presence :) much love Brenda

your bare all sacred ground steams erotic , your call like a moan  and the cleansing salty savor of  your blood smeared breast,  you even put the four corners on all fours after a good choking, and ride on unchained...was a pleasure to take the journey in your words

thank you kind Sir for such a great comment :) much love Crim

Press on and Up Dear Crim-Powerful Write!!!

I will kind Soul thank you :) much love Crim

wow, you are amazing.. this is pure immortal writing. I'm at awe... deeply ..:)This is in the most highest order, defining your poetic spirit.

Beautiful Angel I'm humbled by your praise thank you :) much love Crim

Uplifting n powerful inking my friend!

thank you Poe you always make me smile :) much love Crim

Lovely, as always.

thank you kindly :) much love Crim

Straight up force and courage

thank you Poet :) much love Brenda

Intoxicating bleed...crimsin on forever and ever.

thank you kindly Hash :) much love Crim

What a conquering attitude of a write. Keep on standing tall sweet Lady. Kick life in the ass. LOL!!! Enjoyed this fiery with a touch of sadness write. :)

thank you beautiful Flower :) much love Crim

Hoorah! Triumphant ink Lady Crim. This built the feeling of strength with each line. Brought a smile to my face as I read. That's the good stuff right there. A rising read. All power Miss Crim. every bit of it. Thank you.

thank you TS for such an awesome comment making me smile :) much love Crim

Powerful write Brenda, you grasp the reader from the first word to the last, with a great flow.

thank you beautiful Vee :) much love Brenda

That's the way to do it Crim.. My method also.  I get this totally.  Great work beautiful lady :)

thank you beautiful lady :) much love Crim