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LOSING THE BET
Damn, losing the bet, now I have too eat sexy you in front of two of your best girlfriends. Knowing the women were gorgeous and true voyeurs, made these women the perfect audience for my exhibition. The doorbell rings, you're in the shower, so I answer. With hello's, peck kisses and hugs they whisper of the fun we're gonna have once my debt is paid. But it's supposed to be a surprise so hush. Sexy and naked you stroll in, sitting where you want too be consumed. The two pick spots too watch. This was going to be more than a sexual interlude. As I kneel I give a sexy wink too my fine audience and turn, kissing your mouth passionately. I can always taste your sweetness as we kiss, along with goose bumps and curling toes. Nipples already erect get slow licks and sucks, just passing through. Gasps and moans came from the women. I brought my soft wet tongue too your clit tasting and chewing lightly. I kept hands on your beautiful bubble, squeezing. Raising your hot ass off the couch, I continue slipping my long tongue in and out of delicious you. Twirling your hard clit and rhythmic teasing made your whole body convulse into my mouth, sweet juices erupting from within. The two women now instigating on your behalf. "That's right girl, fuck his face", "Cum all over daddy girl Oooohh". Gliding tongue down too your dark star, I feel hips buck as tongue teases your back door. "Oooohh Shit" escapes pretty lips, as the two cheer on. With knees too your shoulders I tongue fuck you tasting deep inner sugar walls, while my nose bumps your clit. As your mind screams you cum and squirt. In my eyes corner, the two are topless with hands deep in panties, eyes at half mast. And in front of your two best girlfriends, I didn't mind losing the bet, but DAMN...
Sir Lancelott
Sir Lancelott
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19th Feb 2014 11:06pm
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19th Feb 2014 11:45pm
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20th Feb 2014 9:27pm
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20th Feb 2014 4:03am
I love love love your erotic style and that you lost this bet....... very hot poem...!!!.... ;) <3
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20th Feb 2014 9:29pm
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21st Feb 2014 1:48am
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20th Feb 2014 12:49pm
you lost it purposely
to get two more for free
they would be ur next clients indeed
tongue in cheek
what happens to men's longy??
does it also leak
urs may too
to get two more for free
they would be ur next clients indeed
tongue in cheek
what happens to men's longy??
does it also leak
urs may too
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20th Feb 2014 9:33pm
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20th Feb 2014 11:22pm
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21st Feb 2014 2:28am
It's always great to see you slide by my good friend, thanks Bro. SOUL!!!!!
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21st Feb 2014 5:42am
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21st Feb 2014 8:52pm
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21st Feb 2014 8:46pm
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21st Feb 2014 8:54pm
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21st Feb 2014 11:03pm
You ignited my fantasy!Hot scribe, Lance! Losing a bet with this outcome's not too bad!
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21st Feb 2014 11:13pm
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22nd Feb 2014 00:14am
Goodness me, phew so glad I have my bedroom window open to cool me down after reading something so hot. Thoroughly enjoyed reading and love how it builds to that wonderful climax, mm yummy xx
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22nd Feb 2014 2:52am
WOW That means a lot too me sweets!!!
Thanxxx and feel free too read more!!
Thanxxx and feel free too read more!!
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22nd Feb 2014 4:38am
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22nd Feb 2014 5:23am
This is a very erotic poem. I love how it focuses on the unique situation, emphasizing the other girls and the sexiness of sharing. I was right there in the moment, the third voyeur in the room!
Or perhaps the hundredth, considering how many others have read and enjoyed this poem (;
Or perhaps the hundredth, considering how many others have read and enjoyed this poem (;
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22nd Feb 2014 5:30am
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22nd Feb 2014 5:39am
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27th Feb 2014 11:35am
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27th Feb 2014 12:48pm
Wow, not so bad to lose a bet :). Very nice erotic writing again, I hope you'll write the second part with three gorgeous girls ::)
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