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guided by a star
trapped in solemn midnight hue
harnessed come grey dawn
Written by
LobodeSanPedro
Published
16th Feb 2014
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Chiyo
(Miss Chi)
16th Feb 2014 1:51pm
The star-shaped blaze of the horse matches the poem perfectly! A wonderful haiku, LSP. Always so meaningful.
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LobodeSanPedro
16th Feb 2014 3:00pm
I love the look of the pony in this picture so the ink pretty much flowed as well as tucking in that extra layer of meaning.
Thanks for read and feedback.
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