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A Quiet Sunday Afternoon
buzz, busy bee, buzz
on petals of sunflowers
nodding languidly
at passing breeze
a waving leaf
a curious fly
resting, washing hands
buzzy bee passes by
a long march of ants
passing by sandy path
carrying food on their heads
to underground homes
buzz bee buzz
flying flies
marching ants
in the distance
a dog barks.
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16th Feb 2014 2:38am
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16th Feb 2014 8:50am
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16th Feb 2014 8:54am
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Anonymous
16th Feb 2014 8:52am
indeed, a lovely read
nice work, as always
:-)good luck in the comp!
nice work, as always
:-)good luck in the comp!
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16th Feb 2014 8:55am
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16th Feb 2014 9:41pm
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Anonymous
16th Feb 2014 10:19pm
Love the great flow, mimics the easiness of the nature, well done.
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16th Feb 2014 10:27pm
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