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you can't take me home
I'm best left out in the frost�
either way I melt�

Written by LobodeSanPedro

Published 15th Feb 2014

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16th Feb 2014 5:20pm

Love burns hot, kisses let you simmer. May the blanket of snow cover your bed of fire. Lovely senryu!

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17th Feb 2014 11:24am

Wow! ... there's a poem in your reply. You need to write that one.

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17th Feb 2014 6:14pm

Oh? Okay ... I will consider that. Thanks for telling me :-)!

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