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Put Me Out

My mouth is a flame
like crackling wood
I am warm,inviting
now extinguish me
tommielynn
Written by tommielynn (Tommie Lynn)
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Re: Put Me Out
14th Feb 2014 11:53pm
Combustion
Hot
PoetSpeak
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(Tommie Lynn)
15th Feb 2014 1:33am
Much appreciated PS :)
tommielynn
Re: Put Me Out
15th Feb 2014 12:23pm
Great metaphors at play ... Love it
LobodeSanPedro
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(Tommie Lynn)
15th Feb 2014 2:45pm
Appreciate you reading and your kind words LSP. :)
tommielynn
Re: Put Me Out
16th Feb 2014 2:54am
who
will extinguish who
who can tell
again
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(Tommie Lynn)
16th Feb 2014 5:44am
I guess it'll be a surprise A. Thanks for your words. :)
tommielynn
Re: Put Me Out
18th Feb 2014 9:20pm
Either way it goes I can go head first on this one.
CasketSharpe
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(Tommie Lynn)
18th Feb 2014 11:10pm
LMFAO...Indeed CS. Thank you. :)
tommielynn

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