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Dimwits we
Dimwits we
We read you
as your imagination
is beyond compare
you don't read us
as with you
we can't
your platform share...
you are the moon
we the distant stars..
by far
minuscule
lonely
isolated
twinkling stars
We read you
as your imagination
is beyond compare
you don't read us
as with you
we can't
your platform share...
you are the moon
we the distant stars..
by far
minuscule
lonely
isolated
twinkling stars
Published 12th Feb 2014
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12th Feb 2014 1:52pm
Read this here and read the same as a comment on tommielynn's site. PM me if you like. Nobody is a dimwit unless he makes one of himself. Don't judge anybody for his or her willingness or unwillingness to comment on anybody's poems. You might ask for the reason.
12th Feb 2014 2:20pm
thanks i have removed it from there
as I think it wasn't appreciated
thanks
shall avoid commenting
as I think it wasn't appreciated
thanks
shall avoid commenting
Anonymous
12th Feb 2014 5:15pm
A backhanded tribute. Still like this, the wording. Begs the question: "Why comment?" Not to gain the same but to show appreciation for what appeals. Shine on, Star.
13th Feb 2014 00:51am
