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Sometimes
Sometimes
I wonder
Why I feel the urge
to read someone’s
and
not others
but then we all have our own urges
some love nudity
others non entity
yes then we all have our own urges
Am I alone
I wonder often
which library will buy me
I am so alone
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Re: Sometimes
11th Feb 2014 11:29am
Re: Sometimes
11th Feb 2014 11:42am
re: Re: Sometimes
11th Feb 2014 11:46am
you are
one in a million
as we all are
1 in 7.5 billion
thank you
for your kind consolation
one in a million
as we all are
1 in 7.5 billion
thank you
for your kind consolation
Re: Sometimes
11th Feb 2014 3:33pm
We all feel alone time to time. You not alone in your poetry or your how you feel in your soul. You a great poet. The thing I like about you is that you are yourself when you write. Your style is different from others and that's what makes you great. So keep on showing us who is behind the pen. :)
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re: Re: Sometimes
11th Feb 2014 4:45pm
your remarkable insight
will bring out the cream
hopefully it seems
so shall I poeticise
my views
as modern
poetic news
YOUR MUSE
will bring out the cream
hopefully it seems
so shall I poeticise
my views
as modern
poetic news
YOUR MUSE
Re: Sometimes
We read those which are either so close to us that they will not hurt us, or so far away that they can't hurt us. The 'in betweens' we often avoid.
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12th Feb 2014 1:27pm
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