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black oblivion
Awakening to midnight
the night is dead
hours are nameless
I find I am not alone
I sense it in the black oblivion
the ever deathly presence
sencing my sins are
craving a shadows touch
as if in a dream
I have no control
letting darkness flow
along my skin
lifting and Pinning me
against the wall
running its nails
up my legs
slicing into my skin
softy bleeding
parting my thighs
exposing my lust
to its devouring
luminous and cold eyes
tightening against its grip
tongue going deep
teeth teasing my clit
right about to gush
it rises taking my breath
entering me liquefied and hard
flesh quivering and twitching
against the black velvet restraints
Suddenly claiming my throat
caught between pleasure and pain
consuming its self in me
I black out
the night is dead
hours are nameless
I find I am not alone
I sense it in the black oblivion
the ever deathly presence
sencing my sins are
craving a shadows touch
as if in a dream
I have no control
letting darkness flow
along my skin
lifting and Pinning me
against the wall
running its nails
up my legs
slicing into my skin
softy bleeding
parting my thighs
exposing my lust
to its devouring
luminous and cold eyes
tightening against its grip
tongue going deep
teeth teasing my clit
right about to gush
it rises taking my breath
entering me liquefied and hard
flesh quivering and twitching
against the black velvet restraints
Suddenly claiming my throat
caught between pleasure and pain
consuming its self in me
I black out
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Re: black oblivion
6th Feb 2014 4:13pm
This is an erotic that sends tones that plays music in my ears. Great imagery. Mad props for adding your own art, so fitting for the ink.
Perfect ending
Perfect ending
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6th Feb 2014 5:26pm
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Re: black oblivion
6th Feb 2014 7:07pm
Hey Punk, that was HOT sweets!!
Awesome write Pleasure too read!!!
Sir Lancelott
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Awesome write Pleasure too read!!!
Sir Lancelott
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Re: black oblivion
6th Feb 2014 10:59pm
You just clarified that pussy is a dangerous thing when it gets erotic hot! Keep it flowing.
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Re: black oblivion
10th Feb 2014 5:07am
this is on fire with sexual tension and lusty images love it I can see my vampire goddess self tasting your quivering flesh and drinking from your thigh after do I drain ya or turn ya hmmm a thoought
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Re: black oblivion
14th Feb 2014 8:10pm
i gotta' say,this is really an awesome piece of work,beyond the erotic nature,though it too has an enticing value,the piece is vivid and alive,it was such a comfortable read that made me have to catch my breath,it was deliciously dark,it really was but a tease,a mere slice of perhaps your fantasies I'm sure but then I've always heard it's best to always leave them wanting more right? so yea i will most certainly be reading more,i certainly hope all your oral art is this good,'think I'll subscribe to your updates if you don't mind, thank you
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Re. black oblivion
23rd Apr 2018 8:32am
this poem is dark and beautiful. I like it a lot, I love the accompanying art work as well
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Re. black oblivion
24th Jan 2019 4:51pm
delightful read, thanks for rapturing my morning with impure thoughts. well penned. for a critique, maybe a line break or two so its easy on they eyes.
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Re. black oblivion
29th Aug 2019 3:35pm
Brava, Foxx! This line describes well your work, "caught between pleasure and pain"
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