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My Beautiful Muse
My beautiful muse
I've missed you lady
You create wonder
With the worlds you paint.
All the hues of the spectrum
Vibrate from you
Into my heart, my mind
Without you my love i'm color blind.
You light up the sky
With the words you inspire
Waking all the world around you
They have been deep asleep
As if it were eternal winter.
You gently salve their eyes
Like new born babes
They see the colors of spring
As for the first time.
With the truth you sing
Oh muses of muses
Mamma muse.
I just wanted to tell you
I love you
Without you beautiful lady
Something would be sorely missing.
I've missed you lady
You create wonder
With the worlds you paint.
All the hues of the spectrum
Vibrate from you
Into my heart, my mind
Without you my love i'm color blind.
You light up the sky
With the words you inspire
Waking all the world around you
They have been deep asleep
As if it were eternal winter.
You gently salve their eyes
Like new born babes
They see the colors of spring
As for the first time.
With the truth you sing
Oh muses of muses
Mamma muse.
I just wanted to tell you
I love you
Without you beautiful lady
Something would be sorely missing.
Published 20th Feb 2011
| Edited 21st Feb 2011
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Anonymous
21st Feb 2011 6:48am
I'm not sure why I like them so much.. but these two lines are beautiful:
"Into my heart, my mind
Without you love i'm color blind."
But is the line "Without you, love, I'm color blind" or "Without your love, I'm color blind"?
The ending is great, as well.
"With the truth you sing,
Oh muses of muses,
Mamma muse.
I just wanted to tell you,
I love you,
Without you beautiful lady,
Something would be sorely missing."
"Into my heart, my mind
Without you love i'm color blind."
But is the line "Without you, love, I'm color blind" or "Without your love, I'm color blind"?
The ending is great, as well.
"With the truth you sing,
Oh muses of muses,
Mamma muse.
I just wanted to tell you,
I love you,
Without you beautiful lady,
Something would be sorely missing."
21st Feb 2011 4:41pm
Thank you Cori..I edited it a bit maybe it will flow better thanks for the comment and help..peace Crim :)
23rd Feb 2011 3:55pm
23rd Feb 2011 3:58pm
28th Jul 2012 00:08am
This is beautiful. It gives me the feel of something wrote in hippie era 60s. Beautifully written. Well done ;)
